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* We found the personality section to be too short and lacking in canon evidence, especially given that he is the lead character in three movies. As it is, it reads as a list of traits with no explanation of how they work together to form Marty's personality.
In addition, we found several instances of missing punctuation, capitalization, and similar errors, and would like to see these cleaned up.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within the next three days.
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* We found the personality section to be too short and lacking in canon evidence, especially given that he is the lead character in three movies. As it is, it reads as a list of traits with no explanation of how they work together to form Marty's personality.
In addition, we found several instances of missing punctuation, capitalization, and similar errors, and would like to see these cleaned up.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within the next three days.