Sorry for the misunderstanding! We meant this to be a second revision notice, not a rejection notice.

We understand the problem you're facing. However, life shapes all characters into the people they become and we enjoy reading/writing or watching, which is why we include a section for their history in our applications. We still want to know what the character (and her multiple personalities) are like at the current point in her life, and would prefer to see some examples of such without it being obscured by how she used to be -- describing how she developed is what the history section is for.

Please make your revisions and reply to this comment in three days.