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Rekindle Moderators ([personal profile] rekindlemods) wrote 2014-09-20 04:08 am (UTC)

While the revisions were a step in the right direction, we still found that much of the personality is still very focused on the history and development, and it makes it difficult to get a clear view of Lucy's personalities as they are in the present. It would benefit the personality section if the extraneous history was removed and the writing was focused on her traits, with shorter examples from the canon to show how these traits are shown.

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