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At the moment, the personality section reads more like a history section than the written history itself. We would like to see a personality section that focuses on what the character is like now, with the events of her history moved into the proper section.
Additionally, while the capability of the vectors is explained, it is never stated what exactly they are.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within the next three days.
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At the moment, the personality section reads more like a history section than the written history itself. We would like to see a personality section that focuses on what the character is like now, with the events of her history moved into the proper section.
Additionally, while the capability of the vectors is explained, it is never stated what exactly they are.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within the next three days.