Thank you for the revisions, and we apologize for the delay in getting back to you! The linked samples work very well and the wiki history is good, but on a second look we would like to see some elaboration on the personality sections. Expanding of the traits listed or elaborating on canon events would be best, to show the depth of the character.

Thank you again for your interest in the game. If it is possible to make the revisions in three days it would be greatly appreciated.