Thank you for your interest in rekindleme. Unfortunately, we must reject your application as submitted at this time. Our reasons for doing so are as follows:
The personality needs to be more complete and cover more than just Crane's love of fear; we want to know how he presents himself, interacts with people, etc. In addition the third person sample needs to focus more on Crane's actions and thoughts, as an introspective sample. And finally, the linked history sample is very incomplete; we'd want to see either a fuller summary, or the history written up personally.
You may apply again next application cycle, beginning [date], or apply for another character if you so choose. You may apply for the same character up to three times in total.
Rejected
The personality needs to be more complete and cover more than just Crane's love of fear; we want to know how he presents himself, interacts with people, etc. In addition the third person sample needs to focus more on Crane's actions and thoughts, as an introspective sample. And finally, the linked history sample is very incomplete; we'd want to see either a fuller summary, or the history written up personally.
You may apply again next application cycle, beginning [date], or apply for another character if you so choose. You may apply for the same character up to three times in total.