Thank you for your interest in rekindleme! In order to accept your application, we need to see the following revisions:

We would like more detail about how the personality fits together into a cohesive whole and explains North Italy's actions. We would also like a more detailed explanation of his immortality ability and would recommend that you have someone proofread this application, as it is rather difficult to understand.

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