Thank you for your interest in rekindleme! In order to accept your application, we need to see the following revisions:
Your current sample is much too short - we ask for at least ten comments from you in order to judge how your character interacts with others, and as of right now there's only three.
Also, the personality is also much too short, especially given that you are representing two personalities in this character. We'd like an overall expansion, particularly the motivations of each character and how the two personalities interplay with each other.
In addition, while we normally don't ask for something like this, we would like to ask how you plan to handle Krieg in-game and how you intend to play him. Given the nature of the character (a murderous psychopath who is easily set off), we're worried about how he will fit into the setting.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within three days.
REVISIONS REQUEST
Your current sample is much too short - we ask for at least ten comments from you in order to judge how your character interacts with others, and as of right now there's only three.
Also, the personality is also much too short, especially given that you are representing two personalities in this character. We'd like an overall expansion, particularly the motivations of each character and how the two personalities interplay with each other.
In addition, while we normally don't ask for something like this, we would like to ask how you plan to handle Krieg in-game and how you intend to play him. Given the nature of the character (a murderous psychopath who is easily set off), we're worried about how he will fit into the setting.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within three days.