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We'd like to see a little more information about Rosalina's personality as she made the transition from being an inexperienced fighter to a practiced killer, and any inner conflicts that this may have given rise to in her, given her personality as it's already been presented; additionally, we'd like to see more about her motivations, what keeps her driven, and what has kept her going when everything else has failed, as the hardship she's faced in her lifetime is such that the average person would be likely to have cracked long ago.
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We'd like to see a little more information about Rosalina's personality as she made the transition from being an inexperienced fighter to a practiced killer, and any inner conflicts that this may have given rise to in her, given her personality as it's already been presented; additionally, we'd like to see more about her motivations, what keeps her driven, and what has kept her going when everything else has failed, as the hardship she's faced in her lifetime is such that the average person would be likely to have cracked long ago.
Please make your revisions and reply to this comment within three days.