Thank you for your interest in rekindleme. Unfortunately, we must reject you application as submitted at this time. Our reasons for doing so are as follows:
Unfortuantely, we feel the personality section does not convey a thorugh understanding of the character. While it covers the traits Tohru displays as of her canonpoint, it neglects several of her deeper motivations that are still present (though hidden) in earlier chapters, even if they aren't revealed until later ones. As it is now, the personality section is too shallow for simple revisions, as working in the complexities of her character would call for a total rewrite, and so we cannot accept your application at this time.
You may apply again next application cycle, beginning July 8th, or apply for another character if you so choose. You may apply for the same character up to three times in total.
REJECTED
Unfortuantely, we feel the personality section does not convey a thorugh understanding of the character. While it covers the traits Tohru displays as of her canonpoint, it neglects several of her deeper motivations that are still present (though hidden) in earlier chapters, even if they aren't revealed until later ones. As it is now, the personality section is too shallow for simple revisions, as working in the complexities of her character would call for a total rewrite, and so we cannot accept your application at this time.
You may apply again next application cycle, beginning July 8th, or apply for another character if you so choose. You may apply for the same character up to three times in total.