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We'd like to see an expansion on your character's world information. At this time, it only seems to cover what the character knows, which doesn't give us a good grasp of what's going on in the world - particularly the actions of all the different factions and other key characters such as Ryoko and Zekarion. Also, we'd like an expansion on the period in Shinju's history when he is blind.

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